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Nice opening - striking - works, sets tone
Moment needed between Beatrice and benedick to show a spark/connection (establishment needed in earlier sections) - concentrate on looks between characters
Singing lovely - very haunting
Wooden coat hangers
Show that daisy and James aren't the best of friends
Show intent - being made to say it or get killed (find moment to be threaten by daisy)
Officer? Ranks?
Shoe sorting - already starting scene?
Daisy killing in front of camp mates - embarrassing her
Think about how Ursulas death affects
benedick
Move the audience in the scene dock to second scene
Share the coat figures 3 - dimension
Violin is lovely - is there a moment of defiancy
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